Children’s writing competition for ages 4 – 14
National Young Writers’ Awards
For the past nine years, Explore Learning has been inspiring children to write, from the young authors in the making to those a little more reluctant. This year we celebrated real life heroes, from firefighters and paramedics to teachers and parents.
Meet the National Young Writer of 2018!
Congratulations to 8-year-old Mia Falatoori from Churchfields Junior School in London who has been crowned the winner of our National Young Writers’ Awards 2018! Mia was surprised at a school assembly by our wonderful judge David Walliams who not only read out her story ‘The mum with the toxic bum’, but presented her with the first prize – a family trip to Disneyland Paris!
Our National Young Writers’ Awards 2018 is now closed for entries!
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Top writing tips from past judges
“I love to see the voices and the personalities of the people who have written them and that’s really, really important. It’s very hard to write such a short story with a beginning, middle and end without losing the thread. Be careful to construct your story carefully and move your reader along with it.” Lauren Child
“Write about something that interests YOU and don’t give up until you’ve got to the end. Then read your story out loud to yourself or to someone else and don’t be afraid to change things if they’re not working. Just have a go!” Liz Pichon
“Experiment with different forms and subjects. It takes many authors decades before they come up with a style that is all their own. Artists will try everything, charcoal, prints, sculpture, graffiti… authors should do the same!” Steve Backshall
“I love to read a story with beautiful language that takes me on a journey. I want to meet the characters and be touched by the tale, with an ending that is satisfying and yet still mysterious.” Cressida Cowell
“Use some wonderfully descriptive and spine-tingling language. Try and manage to pull off a cracking and most unexpected twist at the very end, that you doubt anyone will see coming. This can be tricky in a remarkably short space of time.” Jonathan Meres
Previous winners’ stories
By David Williams, aged 12, from Dagenham
I didn’t start out as much. I was just a pile of scrap metal in a junkyard. This was the first part of my life. And it stayed like this for many years. However, around 3017, a young man came along and decided to construct a robot. And that robot was yours truly. I have to admit, my creator was indeed a genius, worthy of even Einstein.
Even though the parts he created me with weren’t top quality, I was the most advanced of my kind. I even developed human emotions, which was what set me apart from other robots. For a while, life was bliss. Until my creator became demented… Yes, my inventor had become insane. Thanks to my newly developed emotions, I felt a certain amount of sorrow for him and his family. My sorrow turned to hatred, though, for his dementia meant I was confined to a life in a dusty lab which was more pedestrian than a rock. That lab was my prison. I longed to go out into the world and explore. I wanted to see global works of ultra-modern architecture. I wanted to indulge myself with human culture and great works of literature. That was going to be hard, considering the fact that humans would’ve feared my appearance (my creator was a terrible designer). Since I dreaded my mundane life, I started constructing an escape plan. Today’s the day I put my escape plan into action. It was simple yet fool proof. For many months, during the labs closed hours, I’d been creating an artificial skin for me to wear, so I’d resemble one of the staff. And I have to admit, my handiwork wasn’t too bad. Well, here goes nothing…
So far so good. I’d managed to fool every scientist in this establishment. I was at the main entrance. Freedom was a few steps away for me. Unfortunately, my costume had a loose thread. Which therefore meant my disguise came off. Everybody could see me for what I really was. So I ran outside. As soon as I was in broad daylight, some people fainted, shrieked or ran. But I took no notice, for I was mesmerised by what I saw: hovercars gliding gracefully and towering skyscrapers, with their peaks touching the fluffy clouds. It was truly beautiful.
However, I didn’t enjoy it long. Security guards were in pursuit of me. Luckily, I ran down an ally and dived into a bin. When I peeked out, they’d vanished. Suddenly, the bin started to shake. My audio receptors detected groaning and creaking. I was thrown into a dark space. Then I realised I was in a garbage truck. Which meant that I’d be compressed. I felt the walls closing in on me. My robotic strength meant that I could use my arms to stop the walls crushing me. But not forever…
By Gracie Harding, aged 11, from Winchester
Happy Never After!
This is not a good story; neither is it a bad one. It’s just a story. A story of a brave, young, rather dashing Prince and a rather fed up Princess. By fed up I mean really fed up. Anyway, side-tracking a bit: where were we? Oh, yes I was telling you about the story of our Princess, Roxanna.
Roxanna lived in, well, in the middle of a thick, dark, dense forest filled with dangers, in an extraordinary tall, ivy covered tower with cracked and broken slates and shattered windows. However, it didn’t matter as she had only one task …… to sleep and sleep and hope a Prince either called Jack, Joseph or even Jacob might come and rescue her. Well, they had clearly not done a very good job, as she had been waiting for a lot more than 50 years and was really quite frustrated.
I know what you’re thinking, how can it be frustrating if your asleep? Its rather simple. She woke up!
You’re probably wondering “Where are these useless Princes, who should be rescuing the lovely Princess Roxanna?” But they are closer than anyone could have imagined, in fact, here they come through the woods now.
The final thud came as young fair Jacob was catapulted over his brothers and SPLAT, into the wall with such force the whole tower shook and a rather large brick, dislodged by the force of Jacob, came shooting down and bounced centimetres away from the young man’s head. Up in the tower a silent grin blossomed over the Princesses’ face as she heard the cries of horror below.
It was a nightmare of cacophony. Each Prince attempted to climb the wall of ivy and each time, on their final pull the ivy would simply come away in their hand and they would tumble back down to earth with an almighty clatter. But, at long last, Jacob made it. Being the youngest he was the most determined to prove himself true and with surprising agility, the youngest brother scampered up the tower and somersaulted himself through the window with a yelp of ecstatic joy. He had done it! He, the youngest and most pathetic of all had done it!
Creeping softly towards the sleeping figure of the Princess edged on by envious voices below, he scurried cautiously forward… until… “Crash!” …the foolish Prince had been in such blinding bewilderment he had walked smack into the bed. Rather self-consciously he bent over the sleeping Princess and her eyes slowly fluttered open. She had found her Prince.
The next few days past in a blur and before they knew it they were getting married. As the wedding bells chimed Roxanna walked up the aisle. She was petrified but then a thought struck her… Would she rather spend her life moping about in a forgotten, abandoned tower with spiders for company than spend the rest of her life washing elegant china and Royal pants? She fled into the gathering dusk…
By Alexander Boxall, aged 12, from Eastbourne
That’s a Wrap
Softly, silently, under cover of darkness, the gently lapping waters of the nearby, meandering stream, swelled. The level rapidly rising, its width, broadening. In blackened skies, only spears of moon beams pierced the gathering clouds. They bore witness to the rapidly increasing danger to those living in the isolated Mill cottage. Danny, his sister Hannah, dog Archie and their Mum had moved into their new home, a week earlier than planned. Mum said, she had made a helpful arrangement, we were too excited to ask what she meant. Semi-circular stone steps, which led to the front door, were hewn from the long since discarded Mill grinding stones. Double arched wooden front doors swung open on rusted, wrought iron, arrow shaped hinges. Beyond the mill house, were endless outbuildings. Some constructed from flint, others from wood. Most were in a seriously ramshackle or derelict state, now all held together by moss and a prayer! So much potential, thought Danny, to house all the pets he had longed to own. What better place for a budding Vet to start his menagerie of ducks, hens, lambs and ponies? This was their perfect ‘forever’ home. On a bright winter’s morning, the views from Danny’s window stretched over a rolling patchwork of farmland to the distant horizon. However, this night, as Danny closed his bedroom curtains, he could scarcely see the ground below there appeared a dark and unpredicted change in the weather. Jumping into bed, Danny pulled his duvet over his head, “a bad storm looming”, he thought as he snuggled down, eyes wide, ears listening hard. Rain and hail beat against the now rattling window panes. The aged wooden Mill wheel creaked and groaned and, after almost a century of turning, several loosened slats clattered loudly in the wild winds. Eventually, from staring into the blackness, his eyelids closed. Gusting, howling winds roared through every crevice of their house. Diagonally falling rain pounded the ground. Metal framed windows, long in need of repair, finally weakened by the relentless beating wind sent shards of glass across the room. Startled by the sound of breaking glass, Danny woke to his room filled with blue and white flashing lights. In panic, as he called for his mum, for Hannah, for anyone to help, he leapt from his bed, stumbling over his incomplete Lego models on the rug. His cries seemingly unheard, he peered through the broken window. A mix of rain and tears blurred his view. Above, a hovering helicopter turned away into the black night sky. Its bright searchlight diminished to a distant speck, its blue tail lights now barely visible. “and cut!”. The film crew gave a spontaneous round of applause. Hannah and Mum cheered, Archie bounded to smother his beloved friend in wet nosed kisses. “Brilliant job” boomed a commanding voice. It continued, “So glad your mum let us return to finish our filming Danny. We just needed that final rain scene. Hope you forgive us for not letting you in on our plan.”
By Hansraj Ramlagan, aged 10, from Tunbridge Wells
The Milkman and the Fairies
Once upon a time there was a poor and kind milkman called Drew. He lived with his wife Emelda in a tiny timber hut which was in a very small village surrounded by forests and mountains. Drew was as poor as a church mouse but he loved his wife with all his heart and would do anything to keep her happy.
Drew was a very hardworking milkman. He had few cows that provided him with milk. Every morning he had to travel to distant villages on his very old and rusty bike to sell his milk. It was a very long and hard journey for him and very often his milk wouldn’t be sold so he had to return home empty-handed. This would make Drew and his wife heartbroken but they still got over their sorrows and kept working very hard from dawn to dusk.
One evening as usual Drew was returning home without earning any money. It was a very stormy evening and it was raining cats and dogs. Drew was exhausted from a long days’ work and his body felt frozen as ice. His legs could not carry him any further. Besides he was very starving.
“My poor Emelda! You’ll be very upset when you’ll find out that I haven’t earned any money today as well,” mumbled Drew. “Another day of starvation!”
Since it got darker, Drew did not realise he completely lost his way back home.
“Oh no!” exclaimed Drew “how am I supposed to get home now?”
Drew sat down under the enormous tree thinking that he would find his way back when the rain stops. Soon, the trees towered above him and the grass whispered secrets to him. All of a sudden the whole place became dead silent and before Drew could realise he fell asleep.
Little did he know that the place he was resting, was enchanted! It was the celestial fairies favourite location where they would come every year to have their earthly ball.
Suddenly the rain stopped and the clouds cleared out. The full moon appeared as intense as ever and a blanket of stars twinkled very dazzlingly in the sky. There was a bright flash and a group of heavenly fairies appeared. They had little golden wings, crimson and pink dresses, ruby tiaras, diamond jewelleries all over their body and long blonde hair.
They were rather surprised when they saw Drew sleeping as nobody has ever been in such a thick and dense forest.
The fairies saw Drew’s threadbare clothes, his milk container full of sour and foul-smelling milk and his rusty old bike. With their divine power they were able to understand Drew and Emelda’s sorrowful state. They felt pity on him and made their mind that they would come to help and change his life forever. The magical fairy dropped a few leaves in his milk container which would make his milk aromatic and everlasting. This would be the finest milk ever to exist on earth. The fairies then disappeared into mid air before Drew woke up.
The next morning Drew hurried home. He took no heed of the pleasant and sweet-smelling aroma that came from him magical milk container. When he got home everyone from his village got fascinated with the lovely smell of the milk. They swarmed to Drew’s house to buy his milk. Before long people from other distant villages started to flock to his house to buy his milk. His milk never ran out from its container. Drew and Emelda worked day and night selling milk.
In a short time Drew and Emelda got very rich and wealthy and their lives became very comfortable. Drew’s wish of keeping Emelda happy finally got fulfilled. However the couple never stopped wondering about the mystery behind how the milk container got magical and never ran out.
“Patience and hardwork pays off; one should never lose hope in them.”
By Shathana Sivanesavajah, aged 8, from Tooting London
Around the world
My skin was pounding like a fish heaved out of the water. My thin paper skin flapped in the wind, I knew that the bottle had opened to let me free. I was made from the finest tree shavings and produced into the highest quality paper. A young man bought me one day to write a letter to his beloved on the other side of the world.
He must have missed them, I could feel the pen digging into me and his tears staining me. He kept me sandwiched in his pockets for a long time before throwing me out to sea.
I’m not sure where I was heading but the winds guided me to different places, I travelled from dry deserts to cold continents. They called it Antarctica and I was trapped in between icebergs and cold winds for several years before I set off on my journey again. I travelled many miles across foreign lands and saw many spectacular sights.
Until .. One night a storm attacked the sea. The battle was so fierce that the thunder shuddered in the sky. I woke up to the screeches of a young girl, she stared at me in awe before opening me. I felt a rush of fresh air as she opened the bottle. I had been breathing the same dry air for so many years and I was grateful to feel alive again after such a long time. She began reading my secret;
How are you? I am well. I have travelled across the globe to fight the enemies that had killed so many lives. I may not return so this may be the last you hear from me. I am only doing my duty for our country. I have missed you and our children terribly.
She stopped reading and tears were clinging from her eyes. She wiped them away quickly, and read the address scrawled on the back of me. ‘United Kingdom’ it said. She threw me back into the never ending ocean. As I was floating away, I saw tall skyscrapers lining the sky and twinkling stars above me. The lights in the city shone brightly and reflected in the water. The skyscrapers grew smaller into the distance and my heart sunk as I knew a long journey was awaiting me…
I found myself riding along with many coloured fish until there was a sudden rush and I could feel the ground closing up on me. We were being captured by fishermen and I was being drawn slowly out of the sea. I fell on my side along with all the wriggling fishes.
A fisherman picked me up and raised his eyebrow. He unscrewed the cork and as he sat down and read, I could hear him gasp. His face was astonished. The next morning we reached ashore and the fisherman eagerly clasped me in his hand and waved me in the air. ‘Mother, mother, it is a letter from father, come quickly’.
Jamie Reger, age 7, from Richmond
The Black and White Bear
Once in my attic I found a cuddly bear. He had black and white stripes and was very old. He had a shiny, black nose, a smiley expression and brown eyes like the earth. I wondered who owned it. I asked Mum if it was hers. She said “No, it was your great grandfather’s. He lived at the beginning of the twentieth century.”
I asked Mum if I could keep him. Mum said yes. I decided to call him Night because the moon is white when it shines at night and the sky is black.
I wondered what life was like at the beginning of the twentieth century. So I went to the library. I took Night with me. First I thought we would feed the ducks. We saw a duck with some of its feathers missing like a wounded soldier. I made Night wave at him.
We went into the library. I found a book called “All about the Twentieth Century”. It was a big book with pictures, as heavy as a brick. I found a comfy sofa to sit on, opened the book and saw a picture of the duck pond. Suddenly I felt a shock like lightning and toppled right into the picture.
By the duck pond I saw something very familiar – it was the duck with the feathers missing. A little boy with a teddy bear was feeding it. He looked worried, like a baby owl that’s fallen from its nest. I went over to the boy and said, “What’s your name?”
He said, “My name’s Richard. What’s yours?”
“Mine’s Jamie,” I said.
“My teddy bear looks just like yours,” said Richard.
“Yes, the only difference is that mine is old and yours is new.”
“I just got my teddy bear today,” said Richard. “My father is a colonel in the army, he had to go off to war. He bought me this teddy bear to keep me company while he’s gone. He said this is where he will meet me, because we feed the ducks here every day. I’m worried about my father.”
“I’m sure he’ll be all right,” I said.
“I hope so…”
He asked if I would like to play with him. We were going to play war. We both wondered what was going on in the trenches. We took off our coats and found some twigs to stick the coats up. Then we covered our hair in grass to camouflage ourselves. We thought what it was like to be a soldier. I thought it might have been a nightmare.
Then everything went a bit funny and I found myself back in the library. I asked the librarian if I could borrow the book.
I went home. I told Mum about my adventure. Then I asked her, “Did the boy’s dad survive?”
Mum said, “Yes, your great great grandfather did survive and they had a party to celebrate, by the duck pond.”
Samuel Groves, Age 8, from Wimbledon
The Blue Guitar
“Pick-me! Pick-me!” At that moment Connor walked through the door, and guess what, HE PICKED ME! HE ACTUALLY PICKED ME! He lifted me up and played a gentle song on my strings. In fact, it almost made me fall asleep with his sweet song. Out of all the beautiful guitars HE-CHOSE-ME!
It was so warm and cuddly in my case. I loved it all, except… NOTHING!
He took me home and played me every day but then … over the years his hands got too big and one day, one of my strings broke, then two, then three, then four, then five! It made me feel unwanted, I was falling apart, and he didn’t seem to notice! He got a new guitar! That is how I ended up here, on top of the rubbish dump.
I like the dump sometimes, but there were bad times like when Connor stepped right over me, like he didn’t know me. Other times where at night a mechanic roar sounded and suddenly I would get covered in rubbish! I could hardly breathe, I felt like a fish out of water. It wasn’t all bad, once an injured robin red breast came to nest in my body. I felt needed and useful! But he left, it made me feel sad, he still visits me, but I miss him. Then one miserable evening, a hand with black fingernails gripped me round the neck, then darkness. A mechanic roar sounded, just like the one in the dump. Suddenly, I remembered, I must be in the back of a car!
When the boot opened a gush of sunlight and wind hit me in the eyes, this time a clean hand, smelling of lavender reached out to me. I was carried into a bedroom with the embroidered name ‘Sam’ on the door. Could this be the start of a brand new adventure! Sam and I became the best of friends, Sam had eyes like a baby bush baby and a smile like a banana. He fixed one of my strings, then another, then another, then another, until all my strings were fixed! Afterwards, he painted me and polished me until I glowed and shined in the sunlight. However, I still had a fear in the back of my tuners that he would grow up and give me away.
Samuel played me every day for many years. We played in concerts all around the world, from New York to Tokyo. When he got older he didn’t play me much but when he came back from work he polished me until he could no longer look (I was so bright). Then one day he brought me to work and guess what? HE’S A TEACHER! All the children tried to play me, but boy did they need lessons so Sam gave them lots of lessons, they got really good! Sam taught them to treat me with love and care. As they got older new ones came in and this is how we spent our days for many magnificent years.
Adam Bhatti, aged 7, Ruislip
Lost and Found
Fact 1: Every kid in my class has lost more than one baby tooth, except me.
Fact 2: I am seven and a half on January 6th and I’ve lost zero.
Fact 3: My friend Aran, who lives in America, said the dentist takes out your teeth if they’re late coming out.
Fact 4: My dentist said to me that it’s nothing to worry about which is confusing.
From the second I noticed my tooth wobble in the Christmas holidays, I fiddled with it, pushing, pulling and praying for a visit on Christmas day form the Tooth Fairy. Mum got cross. “You don’t know where that finger has been!”
Dad offered to pull it out for me with pliers on Christmas Eve. My baby brother offered to unscrew it with his Bob the Builder toolkit. “No thank you”, I said politely to my brother. “It’s mine.”
I even tried to eat a hard crunchy apple and it really hurt. I know whether Father Christmas is real, but I don’t know if the Tooth Fairy is pretend. At school there were rumours and I didn’t know what side to take. Jake said he saw his mum put the money under his pillow but Amira said she saw the Tooth Fairy.
My tooth let me down on Christmas Day and New Year’s Day. So I went back to school with my finger superglued to my mouth. My teacher kept telling me off for talking with my mouth full.
Then one snowy playtime a snowball hit me right in the face. When I spat it out I suddenly felt the cold air whistle through the gap in my mouth. I knew straight away. I looked down into the white snow and saw the red snowdrops of icy blood. Camouflage! I dug as fast as I could and my friends helped me. At lunchtime we went back and looked again.
At school I felt miserable. I told all my family. I didn’t tell mum or dad about the note because of what Jake said but I explained about my lost tooth in the snow.
The tooth fairy never came, but that’s because there was no tooth, so I still can’t prove if she’s real. The next day at school I searched again. On the third day the sun shone and the snow melted but I couldn’t find it.
“I’ll have to wait for my next tooth”, I said to my dad, disappointed. He was polishing my shoes.
“Come here”, he said showing me the bottom of my shoe.
“Look carefully in the sole,” he said.
Stuck in the groove of my shoe was a dirty tooth shape.
“I found it!” I shouted. “I want to have a tooth party”. I went to bed super excited.
The Tooth Fairy does exist. She gave me £2.
Laura Henderson, aged 10, from Peterborough
The Door to Darkness
The mysterious door, that was always locked, was slightly ajar, so I opened it and crept inside.
I stumbled blindly in the darkness, as the door swung shut behind me. I tripped over something long and snake-like, coiling around me, entwining my legs. Standing up again, I got a sudden shock as something soft and feathery flittered past my face like a silent owl. As I stepped forward, I felt a sense of horror as something soft and furry squashed beneath my unsuspecting feet. So far I had been relying on my sense of touch but this thing, however, gave off a stench like rotting cheese and decaying banana peel…yuck! I edged away from it, warily.
I soon discovered a sturdy steel barrier blocking my path. I couldn’t possibly budge it. I then realised there were more of them. I tried to squeeze between two of these barriers, bumping myself painfully on a knee-high solid, swinging object. I then had a startling shock – something with a leathery hand struck me in the face! I forced my way through the barriers and hurried on with fear.
Suddenly I tripped and my legs caught in some kind of rigid cage. I tumbled clumsily into it. A trap! I was caught behind the strange door! Then something nearby made a rustling sound, like small feet in crunchy autumn leaves. I froze. What was it? I thought I could hear it shuffling away so I tried to stand up, however I noticed that I was now stuck fast in this fiendish trap. After a few moments of frantic struggling, I freed myself from the cage’s clutches and stood up gingerly.
Suddenly, brilliant light seeped in from a widening gap back in the direction I’d come from, stinging my eyes.
“Found you, Eddy!” called Cathy, triumphantly.
I clambered back over Dad’s stinking slippers, and his neglected, folded treadmill with my old boxing gloves dangling off the ends of two of its poles; Mum’s plastic washing basket (now cracked from when I sat in it); a large plastic bag stuffed full to bursting with other plastic bags; a pink feather duster; and our vacuum cleaner, with its curled hose; and stepped back through the door of the cupboard under the stairs.